TLC by Chrouya
Script: PhotoKano 11 on pad
Workraw: PhotoKano 11 TL raw.mkv

351
Today will be different.
But today will be different.
{kedo}

364
Cameras Combined: Super High Angle!{uh, best to tlc this one -alta}
Camera Fusion: Super High Angle!{uh, best to tlc this one -alta}
{this is a fusion joke}

366
Like this, we'll see over the pool's fence...
Like this, we can reach over the pool's fence...
{this is better context for making photos}

370
That won't work.
Might as well give up.
{this has more like a shrug-kinda feeling}

374
The Food Research Society can cook together with the academy's bride, Yunoki Rina.
The Food Research Society cooks together with this academy's bride, Yunoki Rina.
{the previous line is joined with this one, so it's more like how refined she is, and then they say she's in the club}

375
You have some too!
You're most welcome to drop by!
{keeping this a bit as an alternative because the verb is left out in context. Because this is a recruitment poster, I think this wording fits the context better} 
{my previous edit was Would you not join us?, but this was too liberal, perhaps}

377
Why is Yunoki-san the only point of appeal in the Food Research Society recruitment poster?
What's the point if Yunoki-san is the only point of appeal in the Food Research Society recruitment poster?!
{~te dousuru}

396
Eh? There's only one month left until the school festival.
Eh? There's only around one month left until the school festival.
{gurai}

407
Can you help me?
If you would, please?
{this is a better common translation for this phrase}

532
Hey, you should thank for the food.
{you could super liberalize this by changing the latter part into "you should pray first"}
{i.e. mealtime prayers}

583
We did it!
Right on time!
{more related to timespan}

616
First-year girl came to me and told she wants to join the club.
First-year girls came to me and said they wanted to join the club.
{plural}

623
it made me so happy.
it makes me so happy.
{present}

638
Didn't I imply it clearly enough?{kind of meh tl -alta}
I guess I wasn't clear enough.
{you could liberalise it into a more neutral phrase like this}

648
or else I won't let you have any apple pie.{or feed it to him, if you're so inclined -alta}
{I'm not that inclined}